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[감사일기]thanks diary(2020.11.19) - grammar corrected

aiemag 2020. 11. 20. 00:05
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Today It was pouring all day. 

Today, it was pouring all day.

 

 

I met a colleague who was in the previous department because he will get married on December. 

I met a colleague who was in the previous department because he will get married in December.

 

We had a delicious cuisine that was kind of Vietnam food. 

We had a delicious cuisine that was kind of a Vietnamese food.

 

He gave me a invitation letter and I congratulated him.

 

Other else, there was nothing special today.

Other than that, there was nothing special today.

 

First, I'm thankful for the colleauge who invited me for his wedding.

 

Second, I'm thankful for my house that is always peaceful.

 

Third, I'm thankful for the robot cleaner that cleaned our room today.

 

 

 

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