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[감사일기]thanks diary(2020.11.26) - grammar corrected

aiemag 2020. 11. 26. 23:24
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My English teacher corrected text below.


Sometimes I'm tired of keeping diary.

Sometimes I'm tired of keeping a diary.

 

But If I don't write a diary once, I will not write a diary regularly.

 

So today I am writing a thanks diary as well.

So today I am writing a gratitude diary as well.

 

Today I had a tough day as yesterday because the program I made had a bug.

 

But I resolved this problem, so I could get home comfortably. Maybe tomorrow I can finsish urgent work.

 

When I got home, I changed my blog theme and applied Google AdSense to my mobile blog.

 

It took much time to set, It was worth a try.

It took much time to set, but it was worth a try.

 

First, I'm thankful for google for adding add sense to my mobile blog page.

First, I'm thankful for Google for adding AdSense to my mobile blog page.

 

Second, I'm thankful for my wife because she always greets with a smile when I got home.

Second, I'm thankful for my wife because she always greets with a smile when I get home.

 

Lastly, I'm thankful for my colleague because I could not be angry with work because of my colleague.

Lastly, I'm thankful for my colleague because I do not get angry at work because of my colleague.

 

 

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